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Re: A Look Inside- Writing
Posted: March 27th, 2015, 11:22 pm
by A§H»JÊT
I have to say sir, you have a mighty fine writing ability! Keep up the great work!

Re: A Look Inside- Writing
Posted: April 11th, 2015, 6:15 pm
by shiNe!
Change.
Change, what a healthy and human desire it is to want change;
From personal freedom, to altering the world,
Some people are born with her desires,
Others strive for it.
Some dream without seeing,
Some need to see, to dream.
We need dreamers,
And we need go-getters.
Change is growth,
Change is uncomfortable,
Change is permanent,
Change is necessary.
To progress you must change:
Your beliefs,
Your perceptions,
Your actions,
Your heart.
Change is either a desire or a fear.
It is what we avoid, or what we seek in all our ways.
Those who want her will find her.
These people stand out amongst the rest.
It’s in their eyes, their soul, their deepest being.
Change must start with you.
You cannot change the world without first changing yourself;
One cannot teach, what he does not know.
Change to become,
And as you become, the world around you will change.
Re: A Look Inside- Writing
Posted: April 11th, 2015, 8:25 pm
by A§H»rUnRiÕt
Very good shine! Elegant, well-written and teaches an important lesson everyone should hear. I'll be awaiting to see what you'll write next

Re: A Look Inside- Writing
Posted: September 9th, 2015, 5:27 am
by shiNe!
Robins soar overhead, scanning the imminent venture.
Sunlight peeking through the elder wood.
Winter's claw loses grip.
Mother Nature rises from her rest.
Stones, sticks, and currents shape the river.
Yet, it's ever flowing.
The water knows its purpose,
Shifting, twisting, and grinding.
Knocking on its destiny, but falling short.
The Wind whispering life into the waters.
"I will guide you."
"Follow Me", says the Wind.
Striving begins to cease.
Serenity and order take root.
Bridges are crossed.
There is always a way
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For other poems and written work, you can find it on my website.
www.paulanderaos.wordpress.com
Re: A Look Inside- Writing
Posted: September 11th, 2015, 8:05 am
by Krazychic
Reads well >.<